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William Carlos Williams meets Glitch

So on Metafilter people often rewrite this poem and comment with it in threads that have gotten silly.
wonderingminstrels.blogspot...

I've been busy composing these and leaving them about. This generator helped:
www.joshmillard.com/wcw/

Although I changed the words to fit Glitch.

Here is one:

This is just to say

I have condemned
the bananas
that were beside
the bean tree

and which
you were probably
fondling
in public

Forgive me
they were macho
so callous
and so careless

Posted 10 months ago by Pixel☆ Subscriber! | Permalink

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I made one too! Great idea!

I have eaten
your brains
which you left
in your head

And which 
you were probably
saving
for  lunch.

Forgive me
they were milky
so full.
Butterflies.
Posted 10 months ago by Ridem Cowboy Subscriber! | Permalink
I have nibbled
the piggies
that were around
the Meadow

and which
you were probably
baiting
for capture.

Forgive me
they were there
so pink
and so acquiescent.
Posted 7 months ago by Cygnoir Subscriber! | Permalink